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The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Thread Started on Mar 16, 2006, 9:02pm »

There Once was a Prince Named Eddie who ate and ate until his heart desired no more. One day walking through the White forest, Eddie came across a beautiful Mistress named Misty. As soon as he laid his eyes on her he was in love! Suddenly Misty turned around and saw Eddie, and ran with fear. Eddie screamed "I WONT HURT YOU!" But she kept on running(you see Eddie was really Fat and funny looking so no one never wanted to marry him). Eddie went back to his castle and sat there thinking of what to do. He sat there for hours until he finally decided it was time he got himself back in shape so he did everything in his power to looks good. Months passed by and Eddie turned very handsome and all wanted to marry him but all he longed for was Misty. Days and Days of looking for her she was nowhere to be found.
One Morning Eddie decided to take a swim down the lake. As he walked there he noticed a beautiful smell so he look around him and there she was, it was MISTY! They looked into each other eyes and fell in love.
They Lived Happily Ever After!!

SO THEY THOUGHT............to be continued

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #1 on Mar 17, 2006, 10:04am »

The story continues!

Eddie and Misty lived happily for many years now until one day came that changed everything!

It was a very hot and windy day out. Misty went out to pick some flowers so she can put around the castle. Meanwhile Eddie had a really busy day; he just became king and had alot of responsibilities to live up to, so he spend the day mostly trying to get everything under control in his kingdom. It was getting dark so Eddie called his Fairy, Candy, to go find Misty because supper was ready! SO the Candy was off out looking for Misty. After many hours had past and still no sign of Candy or Misty, Eddie started to worry. He started calling all the guards at once to go find Misty and Candy, but all of a sudden in came Candy screaming that Misty had been kidnapped by the evil Witch Katrina. Eddie Started to scream, "I WILL KILL THAT WITCH!"
TO be continued..........

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #2 on Mar 20, 2006, 10:18am »

lol awesome story so far, I edited the typos a bit so that it could flow more better, but I love it. I can't wait for the next part!

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #3 on Mar 20, 2006, 7:48pm »

ok thanks cuz ijust write it with out doing any of that lol but i will post more tomorow!

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #4 on Mar 20, 2006, 10:47pm »

awesome

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #5 on Mar 21, 2006, 10:26am »

The Story Continues!!

Weeks have passed, and still no sign of Misty could be found. Everyday Eddie went out to look for her, but stiil found nothing. Eddie was at his wits end and sat at his mighty throne, and started to cry like he never cried before. Candy, his wonderful fairy, noticed that Eddie was crying so she went to comfort him. Her words comforted Eddie and he got back up and called for his Guards. He yelled, "Bring me one of my best horses and some food," Eddie was off again. Candy and Eddie traveled for many days up and down mountains. One day traveling down EL Blanco road they came across over 100 dwarves pickin fruit. He stopped and deciced to chat with them. All the dwarves had no idea who he was until they saw the royal sign engraved on his chest and they all kneeled down with fear. Eddie Cries out, " I will not harm you, I just want to chat about somethings." So Eddie started to talk about how the witch took Misty and he was lookin for her ever since. To his suprise all the dwarves knew about this witch and they all had family members who were captured by the witch; so two of the dwarves, Gusto and Neutron, decided to come along with Eddie and his journey to find Misty..................

To be continued!!

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #6 on Mar 22, 2006, 7:55am »

Oh my!

Are we talking about THE Gusto and Neutron?

Those dudes are famous!

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #7 on Mar 22, 2006, 12:44pm »

Yes we are lol the 4th part will be up tomorow

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #8 on Mar 28, 2006, 10:52am »

The story continues!

Eddie, Gusto, and Neutron were off on their long journey! They walked and walked until Neutron complained how hungry he was, so they decided to stop at the nearest town to get a bite to eat and rest their legs. As they came upon the town of Auberdine, they noticed that it seemed to be a ghost town; there was no one in site! Gusto started to get scared and said, "I don't know about this guys i have a bad feeling about this." Eddie replied, "Dont worry about it, we are only staying for a couple of minutes." So they all went down the ghost town and saw a diner so they stopped in. There was no one in there but there was food everywhere! There was enough to make Neutron go crazy and eat everything up! Others passed and Eddie told them we have to get going. So they all got up and were getting ready to go when all of a sudden they heard a horrible scream coming from the woods. They all ran as fast as they could into the woods to find where the scream came from. They were dozens of trolls around a tree that had a person around it ready to kill them. Eddie tried to see who it was around the tree but couldn't make it out so Gusto went closer and closer until he seen that is was Princess Cammy from Northshire! Gusto ran back and told Eddie and Neutron and they all sat down and made a plan to get her out of there...........
TO BE CONTINUED!

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Re: The Adventures Of Eddie The Great!
« Reply #9 on Mar 28, 2006, 12:46pm »

CAMMY!!!!!! lol i love this story, it would make a funny childrens book series. I think I'm going to try and sign up for an oekaki so that we can illustrate your stories

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